After the group meeting I did quite a few editions to the storyline and the theme of the opening, turning an action/comedy story into a dramatic one, here is the final story:
The big change that I did was instead of them being delinquents and robbing the bank, they are just teenagers that don't have a family support system so they do dumb things to get their parents attention, in this case getting drunk and breaking into a bank at 6am.
I plan the credits to be flashed in between the first and second scene as they are driving and the characters are introduced, and the title of the movie is going to be showed in the scene where the driver is dancing and singing in the car from outside of the car contrasting the "party" she is having inside and how calm it is outside since it is 6 am and no one is around.
moreover, the car crash scene is going to be portrayed with sound effects and thought the inside perspective just showing the girls, this choice was made as I am not very experienced with this type of filming and I don't want it to look that much unrealistic.
Finally, the flashback will be added at the very end of the opening with a text saying something like "the night before..." as I will be specifying the time in the scenes, which is easier for the audience to be aware of the timeline. This main character will get a text message while she is getting ready from her mom saying something like "take care" and "I will be back next month" showing how her mom would just let her teenage daughter go driving to a club without even being there to take care of her.
I want this opening to be about how teenagers that don't have a good family support system, end up messing up and sometimes getting into serious problems because they don't have their parents to educate and take care of them. This is a topic I am very familiarized with and I see it all the time in the teenagers nowadays, coming from a great family that are over protective I can say that this teens need some limits in their life or they could end up like the three girls in the story.
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